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hello, loves :)
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Feb 11 2009, 12:17 AM EST by
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First of all let me BEG for your forgiveness. I had NO idea it had been this long since last getting on!! I have really been thinking about y'all lately and nearly hit myself when i realised i hadn't been on for over two months! or almost that much.
Nextly...I totally respect the decision. I am a big fan of TGR, and it has a wonderful plot. Let me give y'all a few pointers - since I have been there so many times. Lots of experience on this end!
I've tried to edit things that I wrote when I was younger and make good books out of them, and I have realised that does NOT work. Everything gets so tied up and your brain is struggling to remember what EXACTLY was in your head when you wrote it a few years ago. Your grammar and vocabulary and mental images and plots were more inferior to what they are now, and they will continue to grow as you get smarter. (stay in school. :P <3)
So, unfortunately, there are two options:
1. REWRITE. Keep the plot and charries, do some modifying to those two things, but use none of the material that you began with when you were 10/11.
2. START FROM SCRATCH. Keep the VERY BASIC plotline, MAYHAPS a couple of charries, but in absolutely everything else, start over.
I wish there was a way to combine the two, and there isn't since they are somewhat the same thing.
Well now I must go because the size limit for comments is drawing near. If there is ANYTHING I can do, PLEASE let me know. I love y'all!
<3 - v
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I agree
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Feb 3 2009, 7:18 PM EST by
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I agree with yo guys....my writing was extremely crappy when I was that age, too, and I wonuldn't even touch some of the stuff I wrote. My current half-finished novels are much better, so I understand your decision. What about the rest of you on this site?
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Re: News! Ugh
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Jan 17 2009, 5:55 PM EST by
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The news s torture, Mir.
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uggg
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Jan 17 2009, 5:54 PM EST by
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at least ya told the truth.
(all i can thk of sayin) ugggg!!!!
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cool
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Jan 17 2009, 5:49 PM EST by
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cool idea.
umm. looks like its been awhile since updateed. its jan not dec and ya dont have Christmas and all that up. lol.
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ahhh!
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Jan 2 2009, 12:07 AM EST by
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I AM SO EXCITED!!!!
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Jan 2 2009, 12:07 AM EST
Me 2!!!!!
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Christmas
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Jan 1 2009, 9:39 PM EST by
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I hope very much that everyone - especially the beautiful, hardworking authors - has a wonderfully lovely day tomorrow on Christmas and gets everything they hoped for, and remembers to say the blessing before every meal :)
I am a total Scrooge at Christmas so you won't see me being very passionate of the whole thing :)
Post what you got!
Love,
Vivvy
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Jan 1 2009, 9:39 PM EST
¡no soy hermoso! loco….
Look it up on yahoo translator. and i am a Scrooge as well but hey what are you gonna do.
i got clothes, usb cord, pop corn bucket, watch, ring, necklace, fingerless gloves, $45, sock (which are freaking awesome) they have grips so i dont slip!
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Did you notice Stephanie Meyer
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Dec 25 2008, 12:40 AM EST by
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I just read over at twilightmoviecast.com that Stephanie Meyer, the writer of the book, made an appearance in the movie. That's cool! I didn't even notice.
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NEWS! UGH!
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Dec 20 2008, 12:23 AM EST by
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What be da news? SPIT IT OUT!! It's TORCHURE.
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Dec 20 2008, 12:23 AM EST
thax much love to yall but i need to freaking grab me a Monster and a Rockstar
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what?!
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Dec 4 2008, 10:01 AM EST by
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THIS IS KILLING ME...
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Whoa.
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Dec 2 2008, 5:15 PM EST by
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Where is everyone?
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Dec 2 2008, 5:15 PM EST
yay. i hope so. its been what? a month since i've talked 2 u?
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SWEET
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Dec 1 2008, 5:48 PM EST by
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Perfect. Don't change that...
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well said
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Dec 1 2008, 3:46 PM EST by
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you write like a thirty year old lol
well, I think you will definitely achieve your dreams. You work hard for it, and if anyone deserves dream fulfillment, that would be YOU!
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sweet
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Nov 30 2008, 8:58 PM EST by
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its good, emmy!
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results
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Nov 25 2008, 12:19 PM EST by
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I got EMMIE!!! SB 48% Emmie like 51 percent or something. Close match.
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Nov 25 2008, 12:19 PM EST
i know so much
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hmmm
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Nov 19 2008, 4:32 PM EST by
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this is going to be good...
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Woo Zelda
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Nov 12 2008, 4:36 PM EST by
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Link is cool.
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Missing Somethin?
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Nov 5 2008, 8:48 PM EST by
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whoa! I know ya'll probably have by so excited about to forget, or haven't had time to put it up there, but WHOA! November 21, the Twilight Movie isn't up there! *gasp* SB i thought for sure you would have that up b4 the election day... XD luv yall.
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Nov 5 2008, 8:48 PM EST
(srry bout the reply thing)
you mind if i put it up there for ya?
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So...
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Nov 4 2008, 2:22 PM EST by
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Are you going to add to this in the near future?
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Nov 4 2008, 2:22 PM EST
as soon as emm gets back from Barns and Noble we're discussing it and if all goes well it should be up tomorrow.
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new quotes
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Nov 4 2008, 1:19 PM EST by
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#30 i thought i was funny. i had heard it before(icon)
#27 i thought was funny and it sounds true.
they all r good. lol. KKHG
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