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| v-chambers | hello, loves :) | 0 | Feb 11 2009, 12:17 AM EST by v-chambers | ||
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Thread started: Feb 11 2009, 12:17 AM EST
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First of all let me BEG for your forgiveness. I had NO idea it had been this long since last getting on!! I have really been thinking about y'all lately and nearly hit myself when i realised i hadn't been on for over two months! or almost that much.
Nextly...I totally respect the decision. I am a big fan of TGR, and it has a wonderful plot. Let me give y'all a few pointers - since I have been there so many times. Lots of experience on this end! I've tried to edit things that I wrote when I was younger and make good books out of them, and I have realised that does NOT work. Everything gets so tied up and your brain is struggling to remember what EXACTLY was in your head when you wrote it a few years ago. Your grammar and vocabulary and mental images and plots were more inferior to what they are now, and they will continue to grow as you get smarter. (stay in school. :P <3) So, unfortunately, there are two options: 1. REWRITE. Keep the plot and charries, do some modifying to those two things, but use none of the material that you began with when you were 10/11. 2. START FROM SCRATCH. Keep the VERY BASIC plotline, MAYHAPS a couple of charries, but in absolutely everything else, start over. I wish there was a way to combine the two, and there isn't since they are somewhat the same thing. Well now I must go because the size limit for comments is drawing near. If there is ANYTHING I can do, PLEASE let me know. I love y'all! <3 - v |
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| Kireina_Kikkena | I agree | 0 | Feb 3 2009, 7:18 PM EST by Kireina_Kikkena | ||
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Thread started: Feb 3 2009, 7:18 PM EST
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I agree with yo guys....my writing was extremely crappy when I was that age, too, and I wonuldn't even touch some of the stuff I wrote. My current half-finished novels are much better, so I understand your decision. What about the rest of you on this site?
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| sourheadsarah13 | Re: News! Ugh | 0 | Jan 17 2009, 5:55 PM EST by sourheadsarah13 | ||
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Thread started: Jan 17 2009, 5:55 PM EST
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The news s torture, Mir.
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